Human sciences
There are many different things I appreciate. Someone gives preference to buisness as sees the success in it, someone tries to succeed in natural sciences. Everyne looks at things differently. Fewer and fewer people are studying humanities. But many people wonder why. There are three really important sciences people should pay attention to.
One of the most important is literature. It plays a huge role in the development of society. Every writer tells his readers about things he passionately wants to convey to society. There are often serious questions. The author's task is to guide us in the right direction. Many books show us different vices of humanity. Well, literature is really important science.
The next humanitarian knowledge is sociology. Sociology is a science whose purpose is to study society. We always contact with many people , we are all different, there are often different conflicts of interests. Sociology helps to solve them, because one of its tasks is to find an approach to everyone. This is a very difficult work.
The next is history. There are some reasons why we should study it. Every studetnbook says that history is the science of the past. Today this science doesn't play an important role . It is considered to be useless. People all over the world must study history in order to know everything clearly, to respect their ancestors. As Maksim Gorky said, "Without knowing the past, it is impossible to understand the true meaning of the present and the purpose of the future."
To conclude, study humanities is very significant issue which can not be missed. We should study more properly. People can't be educated if they don't pay any attention to humanities.
One of the most important is literature. It plays a huge role in the development of society. Every writer tells his readers about things he passionately wants to convey to society. There are often serious questions. The author's task is to guide us in the right direction. Many books show us different vices of humanity. Well, literature is really important science.
The next humanitarian knowledge is sociology. Sociology is a science whose purpose is to study society. We always contact with many people , we are all different, there are often different conflicts of interests. Sociology helps to solve them, because one of its tasks is to find an approach to everyone. This is a very difficult work.
The next is history. There are some reasons why we should study it. Every studetnbook says that history is the science of the past. Today this science doesn't play an important role . It is considered to be useless. People all over the world must study history in order to know everything clearly, to respect their ancestors. As Maksim Gorky said, "Without knowing the past, it is impossible to understand the true meaning of the present and the purpose of the future."
To conclude, study humanities is very significant issue which can not be missed. We should study more properly. People can't be educated if they don't pay any attention to humanities.
Ulyana,
ОтветитьУдалитьI am sorry but I have the same question to ask about this essay: what sources of information have you used to write it? It's not clear because you have not provided any references. Without them your work resembles a school topic.
Also, your topic sentences are all statements of fact, while they should present an arguable statement
УдалитьContent: not sufficiently developed
Organisation:
a) topic sentences: cannot be statements of fact
b) the thesis statement: too general
Mechanics: there no mistakes but the grammar of your writing should be more sophisticated
Language: same about the language
Referencing: -- (no references included)
УдалитьContent: 3.5
Organisation: 3
Mechanics: 4
Language: 4
Referencing: 2